• Quote 1 .......................... Revision Checklist for Basic Brush Strokes

• Quote 2 .......................... Sample Brush Stroke Revisions

• Quote 3 .......................... Richard Lanhan Slices the Lard

• Quote 4 .......................... Philip Broughton's Systematic Buzz Word Projector

• Quote 5 .......................... From Richard Lederer's Anguished English

• Quote 6 .......................... Connors and Lundsford's 20 Most Common Errors

• Quote 7 .......................... Reflecting on the Shape of Content

• Quote 8 .......................... Revision Checklist for Nonfiction Form #5

Note: As mentioned in the text, the Sample Brush Stroke Revisions were taken from the high school students of Mark Jamison.