Strategy 4: Stimulate Images with Derived Poetry

 


          Shelly Tucker, author of Writing Poetry, suggests a variation of the artist’s palette for poetry. She provides her students with a scrambled list of words from a poem by a well-known author. Students are then instructed to use these words as starting points for their own poems, letting the images suggest new combinations and themes.

          Try Tucker’s technique with a poem of your choice appropriate to the interests and age level of your students. For example, you might choose a poem like "Hector the Collector" by Shel Silverstein for middle school students or "Wolves" by John Haines for high school students.

          Below is a list of the words used in these poems. Ask students to borrow words from one of the lists to generate an image starter for their own poem. Point out that only 25 to 30 percent of the words in their poem should be taken from the poet’s palette. These should be used as springboards to original ideas and images.


Words from "Hector the Collector" by Shel Silverstein



and
all
airplane
bags
bells
bricks
broken
bottles
bits
boats
bent-up
butter


come
called
came
cracks
collector
collected
chipped
copper
chairs
cups
dried-up
dolls


electric
for
fingers
float
fit
gattlin guns
glistening
gold
handles
horns
Hector
heads


half
his
it
ice-cream
junk
knives
keys
locks
looked
loved
leaky
leaves


models
my
more
nails
not
no
out
old
of
people
paper
pieces
puzzles


picture
patched-up
rings
rusty
ring
soul
socks
silly
sightless
share
sticks
shoelaces
shoot


small
stopped-up
string
tires
trains
that
toot
twists
that
treasure
trunk
three-legged
tracks


these
things
than
to
the
vases
with
would
wire
worn-out
wouldn't
with

 

          Middle school student Colin Culkin borrowed words from the list above, added them to his own images and created this poem:

          The Attic

My attic would appear to you
Old mangled things, replaced by new
Leaky cups and worn-out trains
Little bikes without chains

But to me it's so much more
Locked-up memories, many more in store
Cracked model planes, some soaring to heights
Mutilated disco balls, accompanied by lights

Rusty bells, patched-up vases
Much-loved treasures bringing back more-loved faces
Through thick and thin my attic stays
Never to be forgotten throughout my days



Words from "Wolves" by John Haines


an
afar
are
as
a
and
between
by
but
brave
blown
blinking
coming
continual
drifting
death's
eyelashes
from
frozen


find
from
for
good
howling
heard
human
he
in
islands
licking
I
ice
icy
know
last
moon
moonlit
much


my
nigh
night
over
only
of
polished
rang
snow
sail
solitude
sound
snowbound
sailors
stars
sing
seamen
should


sun
so
sleep
their
that
they
their
through
the
tongues
tomorrow
them
voices
wolves
water
wind
with
will
yawning

 

          As an in-class demo with words from "Wolves," the author constructed the sample poem below. Notice that only about 25 percent of the images (those underlined) are borrowed from the original and these are scrambled in a new context. Using derived poetry works best as a catalyst with found images generating new images.

Redbird in the Snow


ice wings fail to flutter
broken bird
cries unheard
lost in snowbound solitude
victim of the wolf wind
whipping, whirling
snapping, snarling
in death's dance of frozen embrace

 

 

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